Awesome video! Your video met all of the requirements and very creative! I loved how you casually inserted the information instead of question and answer. I think you could have had some different backgrounds instead of just one color and you could have added some music in the background. Overall great video!
Theme like mine but good job! The Powtoon you created went well and I really liked it with the story and elements infatuated with this good work! But there are three things that you could improve on next time. First, you need to SLOW DOWN when you do your narration and not do it all in one breath. The audience will understand you more, gather more information, and enjoy your narration if you slow down wit narration. Secondly, your voice for the narration needs to have variance when it comes to having the characters' voices and the narrator's voice. As I said, "The audience will understand you more, gather more information, and enjoy" your presentation more if you differentiate your voices. Finally, I heard some background noise that could have been avoided. I can say I am a judge with high critique coming with me that has the hope of helping you. Otherwise, great job on your Powtoon!
So that's the noise I was hearing while doing my research..Anyways great presentation and interesting story! It met all of the teaching AND Powtoon requirements. The images could have changed a little better with the narration. Also you could slow down your narration a little bit. But otherwise, great creative presentation!
As Ryan was saying, there was quite a lot of background noise, but overall your vice was at a perfect level and it seems that you followed your script really well. You paper background really finished it off.
Really good presentation! All requirements were met, powtoon and teaching! Your narration was a bit hard to understand because you were talking a bit fast and it was a little muffled, but other than that, it was really great! Way to be creative!
I like the way you made yours original by making it into kind of a ghost story. Your narration was was pretty good but it did have lots of background noise. And you didn't really need all of the text on the slide.
Great video it looks like you did everything you needed to. I enjoyed the story and the great narration to go with it. I liked the characters and there was a little bit of background noise but other than that it was really well done, nice pandas.
Awesome video! Your video met all of the requirements and very creative! I loved how you casually inserted the information instead of question and answer. I think you could have had some different backgrounds instead of just one color and you could have added some music in the background. Overall great video!
ReplyDeleteTheme like mine but good job! The Powtoon you created went well and I really liked it with the story and elements infatuated with this good work! But there are three things that you could improve on next time. First, you need to SLOW DOWN when you do your narration and not do it all in one breath. The audience will understand you more, gather more information, and enjoy your narration if you slow down wit narration. Secondly, your voice for the narration needs to have variance when it comes to having the characters' voices and the narrator's voice. As I said, "The audience will understand you more, gather more information, and enjoy" your presentation more if you differentiate your voices. Finally, I heard some background noise that could have been avoided. I can say I am a judge with high critique coming with me that has the hope of helping you. Otherwise, great job on your Powtoon!
ReplyDeleteSo that's the noise I was hearing while doing my research..Anyways great presentation and interesting story! It met all of the teaching AND Powtoon requirements. The images could have changed a little better with the narration. Also you could slow down your narration a little bit. But otherwise, great creative presentation!
ReplyDeleteAs Ryan was saying, there was quite a lot of background noise, but overall your vice was at a perfect level and it seems that you followed your script really well. You paper background really finished it off.
ReplyDeleteReally good presentation! All requirements were met, powtoon and teaching! Your narration was a bit hard to understand because you were talking a bit fast and it was a little muffled, but other than that, it was really great! Way to be creative!
ReplyDeleteI like the way you made yours original by making it into kind of a ghost story. Your narration was was pretty good but it did have lots of background noise. And you didn't really need all of the text on the slide.
ReplyDeleteGreat video it looks like you did everything you needed to. I enjoyed the story and the great narration to go with it. I liked the characters and there was a little bit of background noise but other than that it was really well done, nice pandas.
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